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Re: Stem Cell Research
Right now, President Bush absolutely refuses to pass a bill on the funding for stem cell research... Now this research has been said to be the possible cure for muany ...
May 21, 2008 -
Re: Chinese man burnt alive for "not washing feet"
That's kinda funny, but she WAS blowing things out of proportion... [just a lilttle right? :D ] that's great... where do you guys find news like this???
May 21, 2008 -
Re: High School Principal Compiled Secret List of Student "
I think the most insanething that makes this wrong is for her to have POSTED this list for EVERYONE to see. That's true violation of our Constitution! We have a ...
May 21, 2008 -
Re: School Food Laced with Ecstasy
Yeah... It's not really the kids' fault... I just read the article... wish I could know more though! I wonder if it was school cafeteria staff or a student who ...
May 21, 2008 -
Re: Word Game
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May 20, 2008 -
Re: Dancing Beneath The Moonlight
I read this the first time through and had to rethink my thoughts... this is meant to be sang right? a slow rock or soft pop would be my choice ...
May 20, 2008 -
Re: Blinded
I really like this piece. I love how you put a spin on the whole masked society kind of idea. "Blinded" A hero, I am not. People may look to ...
May 20, 2008 -
Re: Tears of My Own Exhausted Soul
I like this poem... it's very dark, but yes it gets a little too cliche in parts... if you can find a way to put a new spin on it ...
May 20, 2008 -
Re: Dream on Thunder
I like this one... you have a beautiful idea here... you need more meat to it... it's flow is okay, but it's kinda awkward to read... you're a little jerky, ...
May 19, 2008 -
Re: What was it like?
nice one! I like your questioning Jesus. Asking him what it was like... Maybe you could use a few LESS questions, but it really makes you reflect! Lines I like: ...
May 19, 2008 -
Re: Death's Dance
'Kay. This one's a spur of the moment thing so it'll need improvement! (I know I didn't punctuate anything) Dancing on the Edge Falling forever No one to hold onto. ...
May 19, 2008 -
Re: Myaku (Pulse)
Ayu! I love this song!! It's such a sorrowful sweet song! Sometime you must sing it to me! (:D) I think emo rock is a good genre for it... OR ...
May 19, 2008 -
Re: Cherry Blossom Petals
I like the imagery! I agree with the suggestions above. Only thing is I personally am keen on your fear-hungry line. It gives the poem a sort of strange but ...
May 19, 2008 -
Re: Operation: Ugly Girls
Operation: Ugly Girls By: Samantha Walters Wednesday, October 10th My second official day of being grounded for life (and yes, I am counting). No phone, no TV, no fun. I ...
May 19, 2008 -
Re: How the Silver Wears
Wow... Silverware being compared to love is a new one for me... I thought it was kind of morbidly beautiful! It was short, but very to the point... It took ...
May 19, 2008
